wide open.

It
leaves its mark
on the way out,
little ripples heading home
toward shore
quiet as thieves in the night.

Maybe you can’t
see the wind,
but I
can.

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One Comment to “wide open.”

  1. this is one of your best poems Carrie.

    truly intimate. ive just endured somewhat of a goodbye to a dear friend and this echoed so many sentiments that i feel at the moment. thanks for writing it.

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